Healthy eating

Sport events

Ocean Poem

Get down there

We have been learning about how to make descriptive language like verbs and imagery in our writing and to see how well we can edit our writing.

Get down there

“Ahhh” I scream as I feel like i’m climbing a mountain that sinking in towards me as i’m take small steps at a time. I am terrified. I am shaking. A big gush of wind blows aganst me and I just got the shivers.

My sister grabs my hand and holds on tight. She seem just a nervous as me. “Are you nervous” I exclaimed. “No” she quitly exclaimed in a long voice. We were almost to the top. I was just going to run down the steps but my sister caught me and pulled me back up.

We are almost at the fount of the line and I began to see the heavy amount of water sliding down the long tunnel. The feel like it will never reach the bottom.  

“Here we go” my sister shouted. We were fifth in line and I was scared for life. W were one away and the pair infount of us was getting ready to go. They slid down and the man at the top put the long silver cain over the slide and I was so happy I skipped down the the stairs and back to my mum and dad.  

Watermelon

My watermelon

The watermelon is round and green on the smooth outside

As it gets sliced open it sounds like and zipper going up and down

As I  take a bit the crunchy brown seeds slip there way into my mouth

It has The rosy misty pink inside melts in my mouth as I began to chew

The coldness kicks my teeth and it’s like a gust of wind blowing against me    The juice drips down over my lips and down to my chin

The little soft yellow string are like mini vines hanging of a castle

The shiny outside is like grass but super crunchy

It has the little amount crispy like salty hot chips

The pattern is like wrinkles on an elephant

The soft cloudy texture burst’s my taste buds

  

Welcome to your blog