Thursday, May 9, 2019
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This week I have been learning about how to put descriptive language in my writing and how to use the five senses to create an image in the readers mind.
ReplyDeletei really like the way you added descriptive language.
ReplyDeletei really like the way you said the waves scope across the world creating foam.
next time you could ad some smilies but its really good Jemmima
i like your writing and langage
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