My watermelon
The watermelon is round and green on the smooth outside
As it gets sliced open it sounds like and zipper going up and down
As I take a bit the crunchy brown seeds slip there way into my mouth
It has The rosy misty pink inside melts in my mouth as I began to chew
The coldness kicks my teeth and it’s like a gust of wind blowing against me The juice drips down over my lips and down to my chin
The little soft yellow string are like mini vines hanging of a castle
The shiny outside is like grass but super crunchy
It has the little amount crispy like salty hot chips
The pattern is like wrinkles on an elephant
The soft cloudy texture burst’s my taste buds
I like how you included a photo that matches your writing.
ReplyDeleteNice descriptive writing.
Next time maybe include the features
I like how you made the reader think of what it smells,feels and sounds like.well done:)
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