Get down there

We have been learning about how to make descriptive language like verbs and imagery in our writing and to see how well we can edit our writing.

Get down there

“Ahhh” I scream as I feel like i’m climbing a mountain that sinking in towards me as i’m take small steps at a time. I am terrified. I am shaking. A big gush of wind blows aganst me and I just got the shivers.

My sister grabs my hand and holds on tight. She seem just a nervous as me. “Are you nervous” I exclaimed. “No” she quitly exclaimed in a long voice. We were almost to the top. I was just going to run down the steps but my sister caught me and pulled me back up.

We are almost at the fount of the line and I began to see the heavy amount of water sliding down the long tunnel. The feel like it will never reach the bottom.  

“Here we go” my sister shouted. We were fifth in line and I was scared for life. W were one away and the pair infount of us was getting ready to go. They slid down and the man at the top put the long silver cain over the slide and I was so happy I skipped down the the stairs and back to my mum and dad.