Monday, August 5, 2019

Photo poem

This week in my class we have been doing descriptive language and turning them into poems about pictures. I really enjoyed writing the poem. The most challenging thing was the describing words that we had to do first. 


Rocks 
Mossy 
Sleep
Gently 
Water fall
Running 
slowly
Drifts
Trees 
Messy 
Sit 
Silently 
Log
Old 
Lays 
Quietly 
Mist 
Cold 
Relaxing 
Peacefully

The mossy rocks sleep gently 
The waterfall runs slowly drifting down the rocks 
The messy trees sit silently waiting for winter to come 
The old log lies quietly... ageing.

The cold mist relaxes peacefully...
waiting for the sun to shine through.

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 6, 2019 at 10:10 AM

    Hi Jemima,I love that you have included descriptive language in your invirometal writing!!
    Next time could you maybe give a description or caption of what it is you were actually learning.
    Have you thought about maybe starting the sentence of with something else other then The.
    Great Work

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  2. AnonymousAugust 7, 2019 at 9:54 AM

    Kia Ora Jemima, I liked how you used interesting words and descriptive language! Next time think about deleting the extra tables at the end so it does not use up that space over your page!:)

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