My poem
The soft short green grass sways swiftly in the wind
The blue crystal water crashes ruffly into the rocks
The old broken trees stand sad but the fresh new ones stand loud and proud
The fluffy white clouds slowly drift away
The tall rocky mountain stands still like a wall
The dark colourful cow’s moo and chew all day long
The muddy slip drips quickly down to the ground
Today in my class we have to do a disruptive writing on a picture. First we had to pick a picture upside down and the we had to to a table and do all the disruptive language that we were going to do. Next then we were aloud to write about them
ReplyDeleteI think you need to change The blue crystal water to The crystal clear water
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