The week in my class we had done some free
writing.
I was trying to put rich language in it. I have
written about New Zealand and the cool things
about Aotearoa. I enjoy writing poems and
adding descriptive language to make it
interesting for the reader. I hope you can leave
some comments to help me with my skills and
what I need to work on.
New Zealand
On a hot summer's day we feel the yummy tip top ice cream dripping away
You can hear the big loud waves crash down onto the sea shore
You can cheer our team on the field all night long
You can rock down the street wearing jandals on your feet
You can visit the giant L&P bottle any time of the day
The big wide sea is full of yummy food you can eat
The little buzzy bee is all your little boy can dream
As you pass through the bush and see the native birds you wont really see
The long farm paddocks is all you can imagine with like 300 sheeps
Pohutukawa trees are your New Zealand christmas tree
Cooking stuff on the BBQ are nothing you have eaten before
You see ferns every wear but under you never know if its silver or not
There is nothing like a big kiwi breakfast
You can just about put the best tomato sauce on everything
You can snack on the best chips if you buy blue bird
There is nothing better than fish and chips at the beach
Kiwi fruit is the best fruit to have throughout the day
You can enjoy a little pineapple lumps any day of the year
Another thing you can have for dinner is a yum hangi in the winter
The little kiwi bird is never really to be found
You can get muddy with your gumboots and stomp on the ground
The shop to go to is probably just down the rode in most towns
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